Caution: Pop track content !!!

[dwells]

hey guys
Some of you know me as a shred head here, which i am lol
but here is a track of something completely different that you guys may or may not enjoy
its a pop/rock/groove track im working on called-When i Despise
and in case u think thats a girl singing hehe its not, its actually me!
guitars recorded with Luke dargie+ pod
tell me your thoughts and be kind
http://soundcloud.com/dwellsmusic/when-i-despise-demo

 

[the24thfret]

Dude I love it!!! I'm sure it's far from final... but I'd muddy it up a bit, especially the guitars (saturate them with some effects or something), add delays and verbs to the whole thing... I think the song calls for it!

 

[Colin]

hang on no shred, who are you and what have you done with Dean?

 

[dwells]

yeah mate its just a template ! but i may smash it up abit! i was tempted to do a solo but refrained lol
who's Dean?

 

[threeminutesboy]

now we 're talking

how can you be so "double face" ! ahahahaha From heavy metal to scissors sisters style

I like your pop side keep them coming

 

[dwells]

it's easy!!! haha I like a lot of styles of music I'll do a country song next chicken picken and all haha don't dare me lol
thanks mate

 

[Dizzy]

Deano, you're seriously channelling Darren Hayes / Savage Garden you big poof !

 

[e.mate]

Dean, you're a chameleon...but sh!t, I like that

For me, that track would drift into some post-alternative direction like Dredg or similar....and I really dig that stuff Give us more, mate!

 

[threeminutesboy]

Deano, you're seriously channelling Darren Hayes / Savage Garden you big poof !

actually I liked Savage Garden

 

[Sticky1973]

Deano, you're seriously channelling Darren Hayes / Savage Garden....

actually I liked Savage Garden....

Darren Hayes plays EBMM! I love it!!!

I do hear shades of Darren Hayes, but I think that's great!

Seriously, that is actually a hell of a catchy track, fella.

Develops nicely, and really is quite rocking in the last third of the track; bust out a lead line for fun!

The hi-hat is a bit full on though? (Demo)

 

[beej]

Catchy Dean, really catchy.

 

[dwells]

cheers guys I have a few more I'm working on ! I'll post em when there finished

 

[Sticky1973]

Dean, what recording software are you using?

Returning for a listen today, I did notice the vocal harmonies are subtly brilliant. Excellent stuff.

 

[GWDavis28]

Dean, I like it man, different. Thanx for sharing man.

Glenn |B)

 

[DavidOfOz]

...i was tempted to do a solo but refrained lol

Two words: DO IT

IMHO, the thing missing in most "pop" music these days is good ol' fashioned guitar solo!

Nice work....I enjoyed hearing that Luke crunching away in the background. The wife even gave it a thumbs up!

 

[slukather]

Very good Dean, you are truly a very versatile Musician/songwriter/guitarist, it would be good to hear with some kind of melodic guitar solo.

Well done bro,

Scottie.

 

[dwells]

cheers scottie!

i think i can squeeze a solo in somewhere hahah ill do it hay !!!

 

[lukather101]

Very Modern sounding Dean , Great hook in the chorus.
I to was waiting for a bit of a lead break at the end , don't think it needed one though.

Keep up the great writing.