Help! New Song Can I get some feedback please?

[ascard]

Hello again guys!!

This is a new song, for a project I'm making. Again please if you guys can give me some feedback about the song, do you like it? What you guys think about the mix? Also what you think about the guitar tone too.

Again for this project I'm looking for musicians, a drummer a singer (yes the song have lyrics), and another guitar player, I have a few songs alredy written i'm recording a demo so I can start showing something and get some guys join too.

I use for recording MusicMan JP BFR, Seymour Duncan 805, Protone Dark Horse Deluxe, Mesa Boogie Mark V and Mesa Boogie Rectifier and Two Notes Torpedo Live.

Thank you for everything guys!!!

https://soundcloud.com/garitos-e-thulu/human-nature

 

[Razzle]

I think it's a great start! The only issue I hear is the timing. JP6 sound is good, mix is good enough.

Go for it!

 

[ascard]

Thank you Razzle!!! Yea I'm gonna fix the timing and some other minor mistakes, glad you think mix is good and tone too, did you like the song?

 

[1neeto]

I dig it. The last part had a ministry of lost souls feel to it. Some timing issues like you mentioned but I like the whole idea.

 

[A.J.]

Cool song. I think it even sounds a little Alice In Chains.

 

[ascard]

Hi!

1neeto Thank you!, I'm really glad you like it! Hahaha Didn't think it have some ministry of lost soul feel in it, you are right haha.

A.J. Thank you too, I'm glad you guys like it cause I'm just by myself in the room and want to do something to start going out but I need opinions to see if I'm doing good or not haha.

What you guys think about the guitar tone?

 

[ascard]

Hi everyone!

Here's the song with some minor fixes in the mix

https://soundcloud.com/garitos-e-thulu/human-nature-with-some-fixes-1

 

[1neeto]

Hi everyone!

Here's the song with some minor fixes in the mix

https://soundcloud.com/garitos-e-thulu/human-nature-with-some-fixes-1

Man that sounds great now! Cool time signature changes that actually flow with the song. Great job!

 

[ascard]

Hi 1neeto!, Thank you bro! I'm really glad you like it!!!!

 

[1neeto]

Hi 1neeto!, Thank you bro! I'm really glad you like it!!!!

You're welcome man. Keep writing music!

 

[ascard]

Thank you 1neeto! I will hahaha, hope to get more feedback from this one lol!

 

[1neeto]

Thank you 1neeto! I will hahaha, hope to get more feedback from this one lol!

Well this might be all the feedback you're gonna get. I started a thread with something I wrote with my 7 string but didn't get much feedback.

 

[ascard]

Hi 1neeto, yea hahaha you are right that's all the feedback I suppose. Oh man I didn't saw your thread let me heard it so I can give you some feedback too!

 

[1neeto]

Thanks man. Here's the thread. http://forums.ernieball.com/showthread.php?t=60872

 

[ascard]

Awesome bro I just heard it, I think you should double the guitar or make it stereo so you can fill the mix a little bit more

 

[1neeto]

Awesome bro I just heard it, I think you should double the guitar or make it stereo so you can fill the mix a little bit more

Thanks man. I did play with track panning, the lead is a bit to the right and rhythm is to the left. But maybe I should've panned them a bit more aggressively. I'll keep that in mind! Thanks again for your feedback man.

 

[EricVera]

Sounds interesting man.