oli@bass
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I would change this a bit. I'd say, maybe, that the Big Al SSS and the Bongo meet outside a bar, late one night. The Big Al SSS takes the Bongo aside....perhaps lures the Bongo into a dark alley by slightly opening its trench coat and displaying a bunch of single coils....
Big Al says, "This is my territory. Now I know you're a powerful dude and I respect that, and any sort of dispute between us is going to end badly for both of us. But it's a big town. You got your neighborhood, I got mine."
And the Bongo is cautious, wary, he suspects he could take this guy...but he sees the wisdom in sharing the city. It's a big city.
There's lots of room.
All the young dudes always forget that albeit it's a big city, it's Uncle 'Rays city.
(BTW, excellent writing, Jack)