Help! New Song (prog metal) Some Feedback please!

[ascard]

Hi everyone!!

Well is me again, here's a new song that I recorded, again same project and again still looking for drummer, singer and another guitar player hahahaha.

I would really like your feedback, Do you like the song of not? And feedback for the mix, I'm still learning and wanting to get better and really appreciate every feedback you guys give. Thank you!!!

Equipment: Musicman JP 13, seymour duncan 805, Protone Dead Horse Overdrive Deluxe, Mesa Boogie Mark V and Dual Rectifier, and Two Notes Torpedo Live.

Hope you like it guys! Thank you!

https://soundcloud.com/garitos-e-thulu/stormy-days-mix-ver1

 

[Razzle]

Firstly, I really dug the song. Lots of themes there, could probably make it into several tunes.

I think the mix was pretty good. I'd turn down the bass a notch or two, then turn down the clean chords in the beginning. A couple of timing issues, but that'll go away with more reps.

Keep playing man, you'll just get better and better. Good luck.

 

[ascard]

Hi,

Razzle Thank you!!!, I'm really glad you like the song! That's like my first concern, I really hope that people really like the songs.

Yeah I'm learning about mixing and everything, ok I'll Turn down the bass and the clean chords are too loud too hahaha.

Really want to get better and do something really nice!! Thank you!.

 

[Razzle]

Hey glad to help out.

We all love EBMM guitars, but this forum isn't really a place to sport your own tunes. I love creativity, so I'm always down to and support these things. But this site is about the guitars that are made by EBMM, and the signature artists that play them.

I'd like to see more EBMM artistry promoted.

 

[ascard]

Hi Razzle,

Yea I know what you meant, I just though that I'm using EBMM to do my music so it would be cool to post that in here to see what fellow think about it and to get some help in the mixing process that I'm still learning haha, I do have 4 JP and a Majesty hahaha.

There are a lot of amazing players in here, and I really want to become a better player haha, have a living with music and all that. Thank you!

 

[ascard]

xD working in another song using my new majesty!!! It rocks!!!

 

[1neeto]

Really dig it man. Keep on playing!